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When my eye first connected to you i knew i was getting something true i walked away with a switch in my hip to impress you i knew from the jump start you wanted me to be your baby boo dont let this fool you im thinking that boy is fine but they are the one to waste your time when he walked up to me to spit game when it was my turn to talk my voice was not the same dont let this fool you this me boy you know you looking good he said you know i have to stay jiggy through the hood he looked at me up and down like dang shawty im like what he said who spring that body stop playing Jamal ohh yeah that was his name i said i really like you with no shame dont let this fool you he said i know girl when me and you really get together your going to be my world what Jamal had just told me was the key to my heart i thought to myself Jamal and i aint never splitting apart about 4 in a half years later in life i was soon to be Jamals wife remember this Jamal and i had 2 kids and 1 on the way this is the point where i find out something is wrong with Jamal Jamal and I went to take our kids on a walk Jamal fell when he started to talk i took him to the doctor to find out what went wrong as i waited in the waitng room i started to sing a love song when the doctor came to tell me what went wrong she told me something that i didnt want to hear at all it wasnt five seconds yet before i started to cry a sea the doctor exzact words was Jamal Dustin Wright has HIV
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