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Date 2008 these are Damian's Formative days. Damian Hakim Was born 2001 August 10th. 8lbs 7oz. Big baby boy! Damian Lived in west Virginia with his Mother Lucinda, father Carter Hakim and his siblings. Now 2008 Young Damian was 7 years old. Early morning school day! Damian Refuse to wake up. His mother tried To pull him away spanking him. "Come on, Damian! You stop your Nonsense!" He only snatched The covers away. "Noo! I don't think I'll be going to school today." She picked him up with the linen And took him to the shower and turned The faucet on full spray. He started screaming High pitch. She stripped the covers Away and stripped him down and Said "Now bathe Mister!" He yelled, "Why you do this to me ma!" "Lucinda! I hate you!" She grabbed And wrange his arm. "I love you Damian and you are going to school!" "TODAY!" She left him there to bathe Himself. He was only in the bathe For a short time, when CJ practically Bashed the door in. "Come on Damian Dad's waiting for you. We waiting Come on man!" Damian dressed as Fast as he could. Running from their Second floor apartment attempting To put his shoes on. But he had his Socks in his hand with his back pack On his back. He swooped into the Car and said, okay I'm ready! Let's Go dad!" Now Damian CJ and Julius Arrive just 10 minutes late. Damian Sat in science class listening to the Lesson the teacher was conveying. Then she said to Damian, "Hello Young man what is your name. This was Damian first day in his new Science and math class. He spoke "I'm Damian Hakim." She remarked "Oh, Damian Hakim I'm Ms. Ashley." Then she said Damian why don't You introduce yourself to the class." Damian looked at her for a long time She ushered him to stand up trying To use her best persuasion. "Go Ahead sweet heart." Damian rolled His eyes then stood." And searched The faces in the room. Then looked Back at the teacher. Ugh! She's Smiling fruitlessly convincing him. He opened his mouth, "I'm Damian Hakim and I'm 7 years old and I don't Wanna talk no more." He sat down The smart teacher said, "thank you Damian that wasn't to hard was it?" He thought "I can't wait for this day To end! This teacher lady! Ugh!" Finally lunch time! He was happier. Now, in the cafeteria there was just One massive room with 6 years old 7 and 8 years old. He sat at a lunch Table with two of his class mates Who flagged him down. A youngster With a big curly afro and a pretty Little girl with blue eyes and blond Hair. The girl introduced her self first "Hi I'm Jenah." Damian uttered, "hi Jenah." Then the other kid said "I'm Papo." Papo asked, "You wanna meet on The Playground with me and my Cousins?" Damian thought for a A minute and growled "yeah, maybe." Papo said, "Okay so umhm yeah We'll meet after the bell okay?" Damian said, "yeah, alright." Papo punch his arm Saying, Later on the Playground." "Yeah Papo." Damian was done Eating and went to the playground Stood in the middle of the flipping playground Surveying the scene as if he was A marine. So wanted to go back inside But Papo grabbed him by surprise. Embraced him, "Hey Damian what Took you? Here come meet my Cousins!" He dragged Damian to A group of older youngsters the oldest Was maybe 12. Papo pointed to Of the biggest kid saying, "That's my Cousin Munchi," Munchi waved. Damian waved back. The dude next to Munchi is his brother, Mike." The Kid sitting there by Mike, that's my Brother Charlie, he put his arm around A younger kid's should and grinned And this little man right here is my Cousin Paco." The kids cousins Gave him fist bumps. Munchi Squeezed his hand saying, "Welcome To the DIABLO COUSINS, Cousin!" The kids talked about their adventures And thier misadventures wheeling And dealing. Damian comically Thought these Kids are criminals! Papo mentioned how he stole a Candy bar. Damian was relieved To hear that so he laughed out Loud. Papo became angry. "Why You laughing bro!" He pushed Damian "What's wrong with you don't laugh!" "Now apologize!" It was Damian's Turn to be angry but he didn't let his Anger surface, Damian said, "Oh, i...didn't mean to laugh. I waas.... Just Laughing at my self." Papo said "Okay, You one of the cousins now." Munchi pulled a switch blade from His cargo pants pocket and handed It to Damian. The bell sounded Signaling them back inside. Two Hours passed and the school day Ended. They rode the bus back home. The remainder of the day was a Wreck. Since it was Friday Damian Was able to stay up late with his Brothers running continuously in And out of his room. Finally sleep, Time breezed by.
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