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The cloud rained heavily on the boy, it stayed a while. He tried to find somebody to help, but did not know the number to dial. He stopped playing his beloved guitar, Each dark cloud that passed him left a massive scar. With the black cloud obstructing his view of outer space, He was no longer able to rest in the puffy white clouds with his leg brace. One night, a terrible feeling all over his body left him tossing and turning A chill rolled up and down his spine, he woke up to his phone ringing and he started vomiting. Kneeling over the toilet bowl, half asleep and fully confused, He just knew something terrible had happened, this black cloud left this boy bruised. The boy answered the call. One of his good friend’s was found dead in the middle of the night they said. His body fell against the bathroom wall and started to bawl, He felt this coming with every toss and every turn that night. The boy had the worst kind of blues so the boy and the girl went for a cruise They did not know they were headed towards terrible news. Stopped to get gas along the way The boy started pondering if happiness is something he will ever find. He thought his eyes must be playing a game with his mind, He never thought he would witness a friend of his intoxicated to the point they were blind. The boys’ friend drove head on into his most prized possession, his truck. His optimism had already grown distant; his coat is no longer weather resistant. The black cloud flooded his head with darkness; the boy knew it was no longer worth fighting. The boy who was already weak from the clouds wrath, Lost all of what was left of his hope; his mind was aiming to the most negative number in terms of math. The cloud rained heavily on the boy, it stayed a while. He tried to find somebody to help, but did not know the number to dial. The girl stayed optimistic, to this day she remained realistic. Tries everyday to rid these clouds and help him from growing more pessimistic. Tries hard to help him face the day and look beyond, She is afraid of losing this boy and their extraordinary bond. Using her knowledge and strength, she constantly tries to erase his negative mentality, And fill that space with pieces of hopeful and positive reality. But the cloud weighs more than he can take. He believes the rest of his life is at stake.
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