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When We Woke, Suddenly Thinking We Had Died And Went To Heaven O' that aroma, jasmine fragrance from her hair She virgin goddess I an uninformed young lad Her beauty was so golden nothing else compares Thought why the hell not , she mine, I sure ain't that bad And to think that they too are so willing to share Fate was happy camper that day, she became mine The guys messed with me dating a college grad June was hot, not near as my honey on the vine Now comes our breakup remembrance, so very sad Early seventies, beauty all over the place And gals started asking we girl hungry boys out The ladies dressing so sexy with barbie doll faces So many clueless to know what sex was about! All those pretty gals with fantastic killer bods Quite maddening when a young man first faces it Knew, knew so damn well we were blessed by the Gods A miracle so many scored quick, direct hits To be healthy, strong and eagerly on the prowl Walking in a newfound paradise, our nightly wins Each of us screaming, like an echoing wolf's' howl None of us worrying about right, wrong or sins! Robert J. Lindley, Rhyme January 22nd 1974, EDITED 6-11- 2023 Note: I was right in the middle of the hippie revolution ( new sexual revolution) the much, much more free sex coming from the gals. It felt like paradise had came to us. As I look back now, I see my many blunders and how much better I should have acted. We in the flesh humans are also living proof that it is easy to be hog-wild when the pretty gals cut loose too!
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