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Poets Collective multi-site network Canzone The canzone is an Italian form with strong similarities to the sestina. There are no rhymes; instead there are five keywords that determine the structure of the poem. Every line of the poem – and there are 65 lines altogether – ends with one of the keywords, which must appear in a prescribed order. Here’s one I made earlier: Bananas As will be plain to people of good taste, The least sense of the five is that of smell, An adjunct merely to ones sense of taste. Bananas, say, you know best by their taste. The skin’s not that distinctive to the touch, But no-one ever could mistake the taste! That subtly tangy creamy fruity taste! Now stick one in your ear. What do you hear? Be honest – there is nothing there to hear. The whole point of bananas is their taste. And look at them – there’s not a lot to see. A yellow boomerang – that’s all you see. Although perhaps there is more you can see. On second thoughts, perhaps sight rivals taste. From looking at its colour, you can see Whether it’s ripe enough to eat, and see If it is over-ripe and rank. Though smell Can tell you that as well, that I can see. The shape is something else that you can see. You could of course detect the shape by touch, But that’s an overrated sense, is touch. My policy’s believing what I see – A pretty common one, from what I hear. Though I don’t credit everything I hear. You’re bats if you choose fruit by what you hear. There’s no excuse for that that I can see. But with a radio you need to hear. That is the whole point after all, to hear. With radios there is no role for taste; It’s all about the programmes you can hear. It’s true that maybe now and then you’ll hear A programme on bananas and their smell; Technology can’t help you smell the smell; The smell must be evoked by what you hear. There’s one potentially confusing touch Called scratch-’n’-sniff – smell comes from what you touch! Which proves, perhaps, the primacy of touch, Though here it’s just augmenting what you hear. In silent moments you can still use touch. Bananas have some lovely bits to touch – There’s more that you can feel than you can see. The curve; which end is which; all told by touch. To peel one you must use your sense of touch. You have to peel the thing before you taste… But there’s more to it than what you can taste. If wiggled slightly, with a gentle touch, It will trisect – releasing waves of smell. The fifth sense, and the least, the sense of smell. Still, few things are evocative as smell. Though mankiness you can detect by touch, It’s better for that to rely on smell. You needn’t wash your hands if you just smell. You ought to smell bananas first, d’you hear? If they are good it’s quite a different smell, A really very pleasant sort of smell, And that’s why you should smell your fruit, you see. It sometimes tells you things that you can’t see. Bananas with the true banana smell Are fruit that it is safe for you to taste. That’s what it’s all about, of course – the taste. Sometimes a poem leaves an aftertaste, Some slight suspicion of a musty smell, The nagging fear the poet’s lost his touch, Acquired a wooden ear with with which to hear… Such faults the bard himself can never see. “Mankiness” may be a Britishism. “Manky” means “rotten, bad, nasty”. It comes from either Scots, or English dialect, or Polari (homosexual slang), depending on which dictionary you believe. Anyway, as you see, there are five stanzas of twelve lines each, followed by a five-line envoi (which I am tempted to call a tornada, as for the sestina). The pattern of the keywords goes like this: stanza 1: ABAACAADDAEE stanza 2: EAEEBEECCEDD stanza 3: DEDDADDBBDCC stanza 4: CDCCECCAACBB stanza 5: BCBBDBBEEBAA envoi: ABCDE No particular line length or metre is prescribed. Variations Other structures are possible, apparently, but I have never seen any of them. The one used here is supposed to be the most common (in so far as any kind of canzone could be described as common). Prescription Anyone addicted to writing sestinas should be encouraged to write canzones instead, as a kind of aversion therapy. The canzone goes on too long to be enjoyable for either writer or reader, in my opinion. Pasted from
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