Login
|
Join PoetrySoup
Home
Submit Poems
Login
Sign Up
Member Home
My Poems
My Quotes
My Profile & Settings
My Inboxes
My Outboxes
Soup Mail
Contest Results/Status
Contests
Poems
Poets
Famous Poems
Famous Poets
Dictionary
Types of Poems
Videos
Resources
Syllable Counter
Articles
Forum
Blogs
Poem of the Day
New Poems
Anthology
Grammar Check
Greeting Card Maker
Classifieds
Quotes
Short Stories
Member Area
Member Home
My Profile and Settings
My Poems
My Quotes
My Short Stories
My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder
Soup Social
Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us
Member Poems
Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Random
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread
Member Poets
Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest
Famous Poems
Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100
Famous Poets
Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War
Poetry Resources
Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Email Poem
Your IP Address: 3.139.86.62
Your Email Address:
Required
Email Address Not Valid.
To Email Address:
Email Address Not Valid.
Required
Subject
Required
Personal Note:
Poem Title:
Poem
...Steel Hands leapt to the ropes to celebrate, what a dramatic comeback victory! cried out his joy while pumping his fists, right there for the whole audience to see, but his joy vanished hen he turned on back, McGill still lay there, by tremors was wracked. The ring doctor was crouched over his form, and called frantically for medical help, another man began to do C.P.R., was McGill dead? Still hands just couldn’t tell. but all thoughts of ego and titles died, nothing but horror remains in his eyes. Were money and belts worth what he had done, even though it wasn’t his attention? To win a sport he’d put a man near the grave, so that his name by most folk would be mentioned, he’d hurt a man seeking fortune and fame, that would be how folks remembered his name… He did not hear them announce he had won, to the hospital Ray Richardson went, he learned that McGill was barely alive, and to the ICU he’d been sent, Ray saw the man’s wife as she loudly bawled, didn’t feel much like a champion at all. It had been so long since Steel Hands had felt a true and compelling reason to pray, but in that hospital he called out to God, asked him not to let McGill die this day, but he was brain dead, despite Steel Hand’s prayer, trapped deep n a coma, he would stay there. Richardson wailed when he heard the grim news, never imagined such an end to a fight, didn’t care for the money any longer, only cared about how to make this right, the media crowed, if it bleeds it leads, voracious scavengers, looking to feed… Though he didn’t think much on the uproar, Ray was brooding, feeling that he had failed, he was known in life for doing something That outside the ring would land you in jail, he decided something right then and there, and gave his whole fortune for McGill’s care... CONTINUES IN PART III.
CAPTCHA Preview
Type the characters you see in the picture
Required