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What was a happy place.. It's been replaced with sadness Shadows moved in Looking out the window, the sky frowns gray Rain pouring down An ominous sound Of regret, our love has drowned What an unexpected place On its face the dark unknowns Shroud the memory Of brighter days when skies were always blue Hand in hand I was your man Only love songs played by the band We were gas and fire, burning intense desire The flame now gone, no lover's song Girl... what went wrong Tears trickle down my cheeks Once I was strong, now I'm so weak Love abandoned me On this uncharted isle of pain and loneliness Just left to die I wonder why I try to smile, even whistle.. but I just cry Because...... There's no relief Just heartbroken grief My only breath a hopeless sigh In my cold muse, I remember your breath on me Your touch alone opened my eyes so I could see Where are you sweet girl It's midnight without you, I'm so blind And still I'd search the world Just whisper in the air.. I'll be there Can we not be again, oh it never has to end Sweet girl, just whisper in the air And we can be again We can be again It's midnight without you ~Lyric Man Note: This is a break up song with a tinge of hope in the end, because that's my personality. Today is my last day on this Mountain Adventure and having to leave this sweet girl (the mountain) put me in the perfect meloncholy to pen this write. I'll be back to the mountains, and I hope all who have lost love will once again find it. May you find solice in this write, enjoy! PS.. Like all of my writes, they are penned from my phone, and I wanted to get this out before packing up so if you see a typo please let me know!
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