WHITE LACE AND PROMISES

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WHITE LACE AND PROMISES* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~> leaden skies speak of rain raw winds whistle through branches ~ plum trees wear white bridal lace promises *Note: “White lace and promises” are words from a Carpenter’s song, “We’ve Only Just Begun.”

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Bill Baker

Date: 8/2/2025 10:41:00 PM

I remember that song. I liked it at the time. Thanks for sharing your poetic thoughts on it, Sara. Write On! Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/3/2025 5:59:00 PM

thank you.....I remember that song too...it was us,