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When The River Fails


credit the stone
that shapes your name




When The Mountains Flee

stagger the gold
that drowns the sea




At Close

disembark as the dust
into dark




O' Chastened Earth
May Your Counterstrike Rage




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Date: 3/23/2018 12:33:00 AM
I like the structure...
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Robert Warlov
Date: 3/30/2018 1:48:00 PM
me too but still trying to get the words right.

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