When The River Fails


credit the stone
that shapes your name




When The Mountains Flee

stagger the gold
that drowns the sea




At Close

disembark as the dust
into dark




O' Chastened Earth
May Your Counterstrike Rage
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Speaker  Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 12:33 AM
I like the structure...
Warlov Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 1:48 PM
me too but still trying to get the words right.
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