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When I Slept In Your Caress

twinkling
        bright as diamonds,
    moments spent with you.
        as you caressed me
           lovely minutes
             f    l   e  w,
           nothing else 
              mattered.
              it felt like
          a fun vacation 
        when I did sleep
        under your arms,
           so soothing;
            my worries
            cast aside.
            there's no
             place like
                home. 


Diamond Of A Time Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Julia Ward
Date written: 05/23/2023

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 6/14/2023 10:07:00 AM
Edward, congratulations on your trophy win with this romantic gem held like a precious diamond! Blessings to you my friend.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/14/2023 10:18:00 AM
Thank you very much indeed, Sam:-) Your comments always bring a smile to my face, my friend.
Date: 6/13/2023 1:44:00 AM
Well done for your top winning place in my contest, "A Diamond of Time", Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/13/2023 7:35:00 AM
Thank you very much for your wonderful feedback and the top placement, Julia:-) Most obliged.
Date: 5/23/2023 4:14:00 PM
Precious moments in embrace of love. Sweet vibes of passion you convey.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/24/2023 2:22:00 AM
Thank you for your feedback and visit, Vijay:-)
Date: 5/23/2023 3:09:00 PM
Indeed a diamond of time, Edward. Lovelyl
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/24/2023 2:21:00 AM
Thank you very much, Andrea:-)

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