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What Else You Ask My Love

As those two met
Overwhelmed with happiness he was, he says Is there anything you ask my love?
She demanded for a gigantic bowl with glittering stars
With Big Bang was created this universe ,bright enough to mAke their life's darkness worn away
Stars ,symbol of their love out shining others
Thinking pleased she will be , he asks what else my love?
Pleased but says there isn't any place to live on,just hot shiny stars
With courage he broke those symbols to create a world
Vast enough to hold those love birds together to live on
Thinking satisfied she will be,he asks what else my love?
Satisfied but this world is such a drought ,there is nothing here 
He brought tress into existence though those roots ripped their earth
Thinking Contended she would be ,he asks what else my love?
Contended she is ,but there isn't any proper place to confine ourselves for our love she says
He cut down those tress to built her a place called home
Then he asks what else my love?
She says I've got everything that I desired 
Now wish for my true valentine 
Like a epitome in fantasies I  wanna loved
His hopes were shattered in flash
Heartbroken he was but yet ......
How you wanna him be
Like her dream memories she says
 As she flew on those wings of imagination
Whose  eyes are gazing enough to mesmerize me
Hands strong enough to protect me
Who rules this world,with his almighty power 
Heart warm enough to melt my all coldness down
A freak he was,couldn't understand what she said
He took on the eyes snow owl
Thinking she will be mesmerized forever 
Nd those with hands of gorilla 
With enormous strength to protect her
Burning his heart to an extent when he saw glaciers melting with heat
Then on the on the brisk of his dooms day
He watched her secretly ,seeing her smile he got his very world 
He knew his soul is leaving his heart
But better he knew  
that he can cling on that smile
And thus went away
She went outside when he was nowhere to be found
There he was..
Lying infront of her with all those she ever asked for
His body was rotting and dying 
Her trickling tears reminded his love 
For she knew then,she pained him to hell
Her grief goes on increasing with despair
And she keeps on sinking in gloom
As those words keep on playing
What else you ask my love
What else you ask my love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/16/2016 10:37:00 AM
Unbelievable!!!!...... The poem creates an intense emotional scene in my mind.......Very well presented. Keep it up
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Date: 9/10/2016 12:08:00 PM
i know...prabhat..u are longing for this..love..<3..ur time will come but it wont be tragic but a happy ending one..;-)
Date: 6/9/2016 8:23:00 AM
Beautifully portrayed...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 6/9/2016 8:42:00 AM
thank you..~blessed~...
Date: 6/7/2016 5:50:00 AM
Listening to your voice really got me to fully understand this poem, which is beautiful, but also teach us what sadness selfishness can bring. Great write, Lekhika, and beautiful recitation. Cheers, David
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Date: 6/7/2016 6:25:00 AM
Thank god....u liked it...i thought as i cant pronounce all words clearly ,it may have ruin its recitation...
Date: 6/4/2016 9:28:00 AM
Very beautifully written, Lekhika. You seem to be new to Poetry soup. If so, welcome to this great world of poets. Plenty to learn, plenty of inspiration. ~karam~
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Date: 6/5/2016 12:01:00 AM
Thank you...I read yours too..u seem to be quite knowledgeable about everything...
Date: 6/4/2016 8:31:00 AM
Thank you.....inspired by your poems for sure....
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Date: 6/4/2016 8:32:00 AM
@silent one

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