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What happens when they break your heart
A state of confusion finds a part
When all the favors and so called duties were done
And then you find out there isn't anyone 
When the "I love you's" should be a different clause 
And all along you thought to give it pause 
And all of a sudden the truth comes out
There was nothing in which to shout
Using the words "I love You" Should give them pause
Not just a victory in a cause
If I were suicidal I would be dead
How can I escape to which I was lead
I go on living with that
that I was feed
And give this love to someone else instead
Beauty has out ranked and left for the said
The heart that it wished for and found dead.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 5/1/2024 11:57:00 AM
So thoughtful.It invokes the buried sadness I didn't know I had
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Date: 4/25/2024 12:11:00 PM
… When the "I love you's" should be a different clause And all along you thought to give it pause…the suicidal thing a bit jolting, yet had full blown emotion…Well done.Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 4/24/2024 7:30:00 PM
I can feel your heart in this somber yet beautifully written piece! I believe in love and that you will find it again!
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Date: 4/21/2024 1:45:00 AM
A soulful lovely poem on lost love expressed superbly. Kudos! >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<^^^^^^^^*> Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
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Date: 4/18/2024 11:06:00 PM
"She was special And always was She had a look That something does And l would follow her With my eyes Her braided hair and Perfect lines" Now that was a good day for the situation. -Richard
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