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Forgiveness is a welcomed thing when

you can't live without it

I drift off in memory
To Carmel-by-the-Sea
We drove up to Monterey
Where you gave your heart to me

Then walked out into the ocean
Caught up in the salty breeze
As we loved each other
I felt the waves wash over me

Every reason I should stay
But I chose the interstate
Now everywhere I look
Is where I see your face

The bright lights of Las Vegas
Are as blue as they can be
Even out here in the desert
I feel the waves wash over me

If you ask me why I told you goodby
Now I know.......
I was searching to find what I was leaving behind
Down the road....
The flood of emotions that began in that ocean
Is still running deep
The more I know I need you
Each time the waves wash over me

So glad you answered girl
So good to hear your voice
I'm sorry, sounds so lame
But it's so much more than noise

If you can grant forgiveness
And hang with me on the phone
I'll be California surfing
The waves are washing me back home

If you ask me why I told you goodby
Now I know......
I was searching to find what I was leaving behind
Down the road......
The flood of emotions that began in that ocean
Is still running deep
The more I know I need you
Each time the waves wash over me



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Date: 3/17/2018 11:16:00 AM
Oh Chuck, your lyrics fill me with such strong emotions - I'm so glad the waves are washing you home. Absolutely heartfelt and beautiful, expressed with moving, tender introspection and loving sentiments riding on a beautiful current of rhythm. Superb! Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 3/21/2018 8:19:00 AM
Thank you roses to brighten up your day 'cause your beautiful words sure brighten up mine!
Date: 3/9/2018 4:49:00 PM
Well done Chuck, great rhythm and flow...
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 3/12/2018 10:08:00 AM
Thanks Charlie! Appreciation headed your way!
Date: 3/8/2018 6:22:00 AM
Awesome lyrics Chuck..enjoyed it from start to finish..well written!
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 3/8/2018 8:09:00 AM
Vijay, so glad you enjoyed Waves. btw Your pen has been dipping in uncharted ink!
Date: 3/7/2018 9:37:00 PM
Excellent Chuck! Bravo! Enjoyed reading your creativity..
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 3/8/2018 8:05:00 AM
Thank you very much Robertina. My appreciation to you.

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