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Wave Wave Wave - Surrealism Nonsense Poetry

wave wave wave 
a mouth an ocean
tongue slobbering like a big slobbery dog
licking my face
wave wave wave
zave mave jave
licking my face an ocean wave
mouth of the boisterous dog
vave kave bave
wave wave wave
I drown near too near
but by the dog save
and to the shore gave
or the mouth my grave
wave wave wave

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 10/4/2024 7:05:00 AM

Hello Clive, I always love your play on words and the metaphors that enhance each line. You certainly are a master at this style. Autumn Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 10/4/2024 7:25:00 AM

I really appreciate you reading my poems Daniel, thanks for your kind words. The wave wave wave sounds a little like woof woof woof, oh I love word play too.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/2/2024 4:43:00 AM

I live on a little Island Clive, next time it is stormy i will think of the crashing waves as a slobbering dog! hugs jan xx

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 10/2/2024 4:51:00 AM

Thanks for reading Jan, your comment is appreciated, a slobbering dog indeed