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"The human heart has hidden treasures, in secret kept, in silence sealed" - Charlotte Bronte

"The greatest treasures are those invisible to the eye but found by the heart" - Judy Garland

"Walk patiently through this troubled world, and you will find great treasure. Even though your house may be small, look within it!" - Rumi

"Meditate. Breathe consciously. Listen. Pay attention. Treasure every moment. Make the connection." - Oprah Winfrey

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A Sam Scott poem:
2nd March 2024
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Listen to poem:
I open up my chest
You see my beating heart
I sometimes wear it on my sleeve
If ever we're apart

I know I should be guarded
Protective of this flesh
But then again your gaze upon me
Rejuvinates to fresh

I open up my tiny realm
Allow you to step in
The veil between our worlds sometimes
Evaporates to thin

You see me when I'm naked
Clothed in nothing more
Than a garb of insecurity
Without asking for more

You see me when I battle
With the enemy inside
You see me in those moments
When I'm overcome with pride..

And all the while your kindness
Rekindles all that I am not
A treasure you uncover
Where an 'X' just marks the spot

Through the sand you dig relentless
On the island of my soul
To uncover wealth within me
Lift me up and make me whole

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 3/11/2024 1:08:00 AM
Sam….what an incredibly beautiful poem written from the hearts view….so clever! Loved it! Debx
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Date: 3/11/2024 3:39:00 AM
Thank you Debx for your delightful comment. Always appreciate you stopping by :))
Date: 3/3/2024 7:48:00 PM
This is top notch. I loved reading this. It is good to be appreciated. Thd poem is like a treasure map.
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Date: 3/3/2024 11:03:00 PM
Thanks Hilda for yor encouragement..glad it spoke to you :) Sx
Date: 3/2/2024 1:47:00 PM
Dear Sam, this is a raw and intimate portrayal of vulnerability and connection. The imagery of opening your chest to reveal your beating heart is deeply evocative, inviting the reader into the depths of your emotions. Your words capture the essence of trust and authenticity in relationships, where walls are torn down, and souls are laid bare. This is a beautifully crafted piece that speaks of the complexities of human experience and the transformative power of love and acceptance. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 3/2/2024 6:37:00 PM
As always, Daniel, you never short-change on your wonderful comments. So appreciated. Blessings to you. Sx
Date: 3/2/2024 1:15:00 PM
Sam this is beautiful, so heartfelt and real. Poetry at its best. Each line is a meaningful pleasure to read. .. best wishes Wen
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Date: 3/2/2024 6:33:00 PM
Thank you dear heart x I always value your comments and sometimes poetry comes from a deep place, as you know. Blessings, always Sx
Date: 3/2/2024 6:27:00 AM
Hey Sam, I see you're still writing heartfelt, poignant poetry. Keep it up my friend
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Date: 3/2/2024 6:32:00 AM
Grateful, Tom - thanking you for the encouragement!! :))

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