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For the Tanka-Haiku Poetry Contest,
Sponsored by Oliver Mckeithan

rainbow smiles abound honey sun erased my frowns olive green trees sing in welcome warmth of noonday laughing gold lilies crowd June I'm no longer blue as butterflies spread scent news they're maroon in hue

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/3/2025 10:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely "Total Change" write and picture. Have a blessed day with your win................

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 8/3/2025 10:34:00 AM

Congrats on your placement in my contest Evelyn. Great prompt for your entry poem

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/3/2025 10:17:00 PM

Thank you so much for your warm words of congratulations, Oliver. I enjoyed your exciting contest very much. Have a wonderful week! :)

Rowena Velasco

Date: 8/3/2025 6:05:00 AM

Such a lovely burst of color and joy! The imagery is so fresh—'laughing gold lilies' and 'butterflies spreading scent news' just made me smile. This reads like sunshine in poem form!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/3/2025 10:27:00 PM

Thank you for the joy your lovely comments bring, Rowena. I hope your week is blessed. :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/2/2025 2:21:00 AM

A colorful poem that reads like a good contender for the contest. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/2/2025 4:49:00 PM

You're so very welcome, Sara. Deepest thanks for your smile inducing remarks. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/31/2025 6:16:00 AM

- Your colorful poems are always a joy to read, Evelyn :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/31/2025 8:52:00 PM

So nice to know, Anne-Lise! Thank you very much. :)

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 7/31/2025 3:36:00 AM

Aw, so joyous! My own heart rose up as I read your happy and sweet poem Evelyn :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/31/2025 8:50:00 PM

Thank you so much, BJ. Your wonderful comment leaves me smiling. :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/31/2025 3:34:00 AM

Fragrance and colours. They are your trade mark, You always please, dear Evelyn.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/31/2025 8:48:00 PM

What a delight to know you enjoyed this! Thank you for your gracious response, my friend. :)

Bill Baker

Date: 7/30/2025 5:18:00 PM

I love the way you use many colors in your poetry, Evelyn. Nice entry for the contest, my friend. Good luck! Bill

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/30/2025 5:39:00 PM

I appreciate your gracious, uplifting words so much, Bill. Thanks for the well wishes, too. Blessings.