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Top Ten Percent

Plastic for garment hopeful Mc Guyver
        Privileged upbringing Mum funded Uni
        Drooping arms self described Survivor 
        Sends selfies working store security 

       
        Each week forgot which time we'd set to meet
        Busy cuddling cat in his hoarders house
        Box obstructed rooms, pet fur pile retreat
        Expensive half hour at strip club aroused
         

        Deep thought Duncan sombre long faced hellos
        Told off at new job for being morose
        Six year psychiatrist compiled his woes 
        Used a lot of glue trying to make clothes! 


         Fifty eight, next door mother truest friend 
         Asserts he's recognised among top ten


 
                      
                   31st January
    
                Duncan in denial

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