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Tania's personification contest  3/25/24

Nimbus clouds are spinning and swirling
Lightning is swiftly sending his bolts hurling
Silver spears he's throwing to Earth are my cue
to boom before a violent storm passes through

When I roar, clamoring aloud, buildings shake
People tremble as if I was causing an earthquake
There's a deafening timber in the sound of my voice
It's the only way I can speak and it's not by choice

Many have great fear of me, but I do them no harm
They should think of me as a warning alarm
when in the far off distance they hear my call
telling of a thunderstorm approaching with a squall

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Date: 4/8/2024 4:51:00 PM
Powerful as thunder itself, Mark! You capture the grandeur of thunder. Love the original and fresh rhyme schemes! Congratulations on your win! Easter blessings to you!
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Date: 4/7/2024 9:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Thunder Roars" write. I love to hear the thunder... Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Date: 4/5/2024 4:24:00 PM
Mark, enjoyed the roar of thunder in your lines, congratulations on your first place win.
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