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This Firefly Night-Turner and Logan Collaboration

The moon was peeking through the naked trees
The breeze that blew that day had gone to bed
A lonely nightingale perched overhead
Harassed the silence with his sad reprise

The creaking porch swing's old familiar tune
No fitting lyrics could I ever write
To my sweet love on this warm firefly night
The melancholic song I'd never croon

Ten trillion stars, a shimmering chemise
Which cloaked the sky in sparkles green and red
Connected by the rays of golden thread
How could one tire, admiring nights like these?

Upon magnolia trees, blossoms were strewn
The nightingale heard her call and took flight
I might sit here until the morning light
Like days of old, these nights would make us swoon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 8/11/2023 7:10:00 PM
A wonderful collab from two of my fave writers.
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Date: 4/7/2023 6:30:00 PM
A beautiful collab, Jenna and DT, together your imagery takes the reader to high places:)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/8/2023 1:17:00 AM
Thank you for such lovely comments, Joanna.
Date: 4/7/2023 12:36:00 AM
The third stanza is remarkable. Almost a standalone piece. That nightingale song can be foreboding, too. Beauty and yet melancholy.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/7/2023 12:37:00 AM
Thanks for the great comments, AP.
Date: 4/6/2023 7:22:00 AM
Love this Jenna. You and Daniel make a good team. A magical quality about this one. :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/6/2023 8:00:00 AM
Hi Linda, and thanks so very much for leaving your kind words.
Date: 4/5/2023 1:24:00 PM
A wonderful collaboration Jenna and Daniel… Belle
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/5/2023 4:40:00 PM
Thank you, Belle. I appreciate you for commenting on both posts.
Date: 4/5/2023 10:30:00 AM
Danny, This one's on you. Thanks for the invitation.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/5/2023 10:31:00 AM
I think we have the hang of it!
Date: 4/5/2023 10:30:00 AM
Thank you, Jenna for your wonderful lines and your tireless effort. It was a lot of fun!
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