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The Right Words

The right words eventually come--they do
Words from the deep form the song I sing
They don't come easily, yet they break through
Drop enough of them, and they might ring

Words from the deep form the song I sing
Never as dreamy and pretty as yours
Drop enough of them, and they might ring
They might fly away, or bust down the doors

Never as dreamy and pretty as yours
Dredged up words from dark depths buried deep
They might fly away, or bust down the doors
Words freed like water I no longer keep

Dredged up words from dark depths buried deep
The good, bad and ugly things I should know
Words freed like water I no longer keep
Works, not of art, merely written for show

The, good, bad and ugly things I should know
They don't come easily, yet they break through
Works, not of art, merely written for show
The right words eventually come--they do

Pantoum On Writing Poetry Poetry Contest Hosted by L Milton Hankins 12-2-2022

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Date: 12/3/2022 3:43:00 AM
I think you found the right words for this Pantoum. Nicely accomplished, Steven.
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Steven Young
Date: 12/5/2022 12:28:00 PM
Thanks. Rhyming verses are very difficult for me, a real challenge. Thanks, for the read and comment, Jenna.

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