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Written, August 1, 2025
For The Contest, “J With Four Options”
Sponsor, Constance La France

“that inner journey starts the day we're born . . .
     we pray the road be worthy, fully worn”
                                                     _by poet
life becomes an inner journey
one which we shape and travel birth to death
          that's semi-planned and influenced
by circumstances that direct and form our youth
      yet at some stage the journey's up to us
          to then complete the steps . . .
but signs are missing from our view
        and so our moving on comes from within
           sometimes it leads to a dead end . . .
to start and plan again the path we take

      genetics sometimes lies in wait
to spring its inborn path
          and moves us to a road we recognize
      as so familiar in our genes . . .
but many times there is no guide to lead us on
      and we must follow roads that suit us best
          a task that is not simple but with diligence
      that journey we create 
          to travel through the years . . .
we hope presents a fulfilled lifetime in the end

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Date: 8/19/2025 9:12:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my J With Four Options contest. Your poem is beautiful and I love the quote and image, Constance
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Date: 8/19/2025 2:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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