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The Gift

I awoke
in the night
that was drenching the city
I strolled to the sea side...

Sleepy crescent moon
kissing the ocean
the sweet song
of the waves...

As I walked
they touched the shore
like hushing fingers
stars winking...

Gently the ocean breeze
reached out to me
as the dawn slowly arrived
with a golden handful

of the gulls cries
suddenly I remembered
what awakened me was dreams of
her sweet gift from the day before...
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/23/2015 1:12:00 AM
We know a person is very, very special when their kind actions are relived in our dreams... I really enjoyed your lovely poem and it's beautiful imagery. Nicely done, Ken!
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Date: 1/19/2015 11:45:00 PM
this is beautiful from start to finish. you have produced a gem!
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Ken Carroll
Date: 1/20/2015 6:11:00 PM
Thank you Andrea!
Date: 1/19/2015 11:16:00 PM
how beautiful...loved it...hugs, Deb
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Ken Carroll
Date: 1/20/2015 6:11:00 PM
Thank you Deb!
Date: 1/19/2015 9:37:00 PM
Beautiful pen here Ken! Enjoyed it your piece dear friend. I enjoyed!A 7 from me! Have a nice day! :) Love and hugs!xxxxxx D. ^O^"
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Ken Carroll
Date: 1/20/2015 6:11:00 PM
Thank you Dorian!

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