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the angel on the mantel 
comes from an old wagon road 
that cuts from desert brush
into the burnished hills
where creosote breaks up and scatters 
at the base of the Chiricahuas
where Fort Bowie Calvary slaughtered 
Apache braves
where an old cancerous man treks
miles of primitive trail
into the heart of a sacred mountain
for pure white marble, cut into blocks 
and stacked 
one hundred years ago
to wait for a truck that never came
it's an arduous  journey
for a piece of rock
especially 
for a man 
half-blinded as a little boy
by that first nuclear blast
in that sneak attack on New Mexico
arduous
for a man riddled with cancer
who could be spending his days
easier

"what behooves you to do it?"

"it's something to do while I'm here," he says
"we all need something to do while we're here
even if you're sitting on your couch, watching t.v.
eating potato chips 
it's something to do
this is what I enjoy, so this is what I do"

he finds his chunk of marble
it tells him what it's supposed to be
he sculpts the figure 
as he sees it
roughly
and really not rough at all

for he feels 
more than he sees
and you feel 
what he sees
angel on the mantel
do you feel me

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Date: 12/20/2022 1:06:00 PM
Beautifully written. I love that word "behooves"...at first I thought it may have been shark cartilage with the rippling effect on the wings, but the marble sculpture and shape unique. Whoever found it, and shaped it, is a unique individual indeed, with an eye for detail, others might miss. May all your angels watch over you at Christmas. Leanne.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 12/20/2022 3:45:00 PM
I like the blues and ocean/beach tones. But you can use many colours and themes. Best to start small. https://youtu.be/vE-LmzMKeL4
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 12/20/2022 3:40:00 PM
https://youtu.be/zBvpWNeqV4M
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 12/20/2022 3:40:00 PM
https://youtu.be/4z9GLs7-INk
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 12/20/2022 3:39:00 PM
thank you for the link. a bit like writing poetry..."you've got to do something while you're here...keeps me out of trouble". I've been looking at this lately, not sure if you are into painting. I've been looking at working with the two mediums (wood and epoxy resin / paint). I think very beautiful. You might like this.
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Steven Young
Date: 12/20/2022 2:14:00 PM
Thank you, Leanne, for Fantasia and your comment. This is a video of the sculptor, Ted Dickinson... the word "behooves" is used at the beginning in the interview. I know a lady who knew him and collects all of his works... I am always fascinated by his work and his story... https://youtu.be/tqqDfuFfnFg
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 12/20/2022 1:07:00 PM
https://youtu.be/IPcNmIhiaoY

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