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Ten Commandments To Win Her Heart Forever

Hide and seek
Seek then hide
Ask and refuse
Refuse then ask
Be the fan-belt
Discover her springs
Warm up her autumns
Heat up her winters
Cool down her summers
Then pamper, flatter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/2/2019 3:53:00 PM
I like the tone, Solomon: Commandments, yes---but light, not heavy-handed. Nicely done! ~ gw
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Solomon Ochwo-Oburu
Date: 8/3/2019 3:32:00 AM
A pleasure to read your comments, Gershon
Date: 6/10/2019 1:14:00 AM
I like the image of being a fan belt. Kind wishes, Kai
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Solomon Ochwo-Oburu
Date: 6/12/2019 10:16:00 AM
You make me great, Michael. Thanks
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Solomon Ochwo-Oburu
Date: 6/12/2019 10:16:00 AM
You make me great, Michael. Thanks

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