Solomon Ochwo-Oburu Poet Rhyme

Ten Commandments To Win Her Heart Forever

Hide and seek
Seek then hide
Ask and refuse
Refuse then ask
Be the fan-belt
Discover her springs
Warm up her autumns
Heat up her winters
Cool down her summers
Then pamper, flatter

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Gershon Wolf August 2, 2019 at 3:53 PM I like the tone, Solomon: Commandments, yes---but light, not heavy-handed. Nicely done! ~ gw Solomon Ochwo-Oburu August 3, 2019 at 3:32 AM A pleasure to read your comments, Gershon

Kai Michael Neumann June 10, 2019 at 1:14 AM I like the image of being a fan belt. Kind wishes, Kai Solomon Ochwo-Oburu June 12, 2019 at 10:16 AM You make me great, Michael. Thanks Solomon Ochwo-Oburu June 12, 2019 at 10:16 AM You make me great, Michael. Thanks