Sunshine Invasion

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red heart of morning guilty shadows fled like dreams scattering moonbeams Blue jay on green rose caressed by gold creeping heat petals and concrete saffron veiled dancers of every scent and color city sun culture pearly paths faded plum day's grown a bit older sunshine's grown bolder

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/3/2025 10:50:00 AM

What creative/fun Haiku writes you have here. Love Them... Pretty Bright Sun Picture... Have a fun day writing away..........

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/3/2025 10:04:00 PM

Your remarks are very much appreciated, Paula. Have a great week. :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/3/2025 9:48:00 AM

Creative work that you have penned in this one, Evelyn. It is amazing how you show the progression of the sun in the morning to the end of the day. Sara K

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/3/2025 10:06:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words of esteem, Sara. Have a wonderful week. :)

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 8/2/2025 11:21:00 AM

That's a brilliant creative write. I truly enjoyed reading it. Best wishes .!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/2/2025 5:04:00 PM

I extend my heartfelt thanks, for your very valued remarks, Paghunda. Blessings. :)

Rowena Velasco

Date: 7/29/2025 4:44:00 AM

Each verse paints such vivid moments—it's like watching the day bloom and shift right in front of me. I especially loved the image of the blue jay on the green rose—nature meeting city life so gracefully. Beautiful work!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/29/2025 8:07:00 PM

Your gracious comments are very much appreciated, Rowena. I extend my deepest thanks. :)