Evelyn Judy Buehler Poet Haiku

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Sunshine Invasion

red heart of morning
guilty shadows fled like dreams
scattering moonbeams

Blue jay on green rose
caressed by gold creeping heat
petals and concrete

saffron veiled dancers
of every scent and color
city sun culture

pearly paths faded
plum day's grown a bit older
sunshine's grown bolder

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Paula Goldsmith August 3, 2025 at 10:50 AM What creative/fun Haiku writes you have here. Love Them... Pretty Bright Sun Picture... Have a fun day writing away.......... Evelyn Judy Buehler August 3, 2025 at 10:04 PM Your remarks are very much appreciated, Paula. Have a great week. :)

Sara Kendrick August 3, 2025 at 9:48 AM Creative work that you have penned in this one, Evelyn. It is amazing how you show the progression of the sun in the morning to the end of the day. Sara K Evelyn Judy Buehler August 3, 2025 at 10:06 PM Thank you for your kind words of esteem, Sara. Have a wonderful week. :)

Paghunda Zahid August 2, 2025 at 11:21 AM That's a brilliant creative write. I truly enjoyed reading it. Best wishes .! Evelyn Judy Buehler August 2, 2025 at 5:04 PM I extend my heartfelt thanks, for your very valued remarks, Paghunda. Blessings. :)

Rowena Velasco July 29, 2025 at 4:44 AM Each verse paints such vivid moments—it's like watching the day bloom and shift right in front of me. I especially loved the image of the blue jay on the green rose—nature meeting city life so gracefully. Beautiful work! Evelyn Judy Buehler July 29, 2025 at 8:07 PM Your gracious comments are very much appreciated, Rowena. I extend my deepest thanks. :)

Kim Rodrigues July 25, 2025 at 1:17 PM Dear Evelyn, you are so good at colorful imagery. “blue jay on green rose” - how unique! A fave! Evelyn Judy Buehler July 25, 2025 at 3:21 PM Deepest thanks for your warm words and your fave, dear Kim. :)

Victor Buhagiar July 25, 2025 at 5:26 AM I've never seen a green rose. Very inspiring. Great haikus too. Hugs. Evelyn Judy Buehler July 25, 2025 at 9:58 AM Yes there are also roses so deep purple, that they appear black. Thanks for the lovely comment. :)

Yann Rolland July 22, 2025 at 8:00 PM brilliant haikus, both inspiring, thanks poet evelyn Evelyn Judy Buehler July 22, 2025 at 9:10 PM I appreciate your lovely thoughts so much, Yann. :)