Summer Joy Hiku 41

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Placed First in: 1397 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand

Summer Joy Hiku a sweet cold treat melting softly in the mouth~ summer joy in hand. e r ~ ~ a a s -w -e -e -t c o l d t ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ t m ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ y in the m ~o ~ u ~t ~h~ e ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ l l ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~t t ~ ~ ~ ~ f l ~ ~ ~o n ~ s g s ~u ~m ~m ~e ~r j -o -Y in h ~ a ~n ~d.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/24/2025 3:28:00 PM

Love it, want it!!! Congrats

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 7/26/2025 12:41:00 PM

Thanks for appreciating the write and your kind wishes, dear poetess. Would have sent you what the picture purports if it could be transmitted electronically. It may be particularly desired in these summer months. You can save the picture which is quite appealing. Wish you a pleasant weekend.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/24/2025 4:05:00 AM

Glad you wrote it the old way so it would be easier to know what is actually on the page and in the poet's mind. Congrats on your winner. Way to go. Sara K

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/24/2025 2:18:00 AM

Outstanding shape, Krish. Your creativity is just so artistically expressed. Congratulations on your trophy win.

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 7/26/2025 12:32:00 PM

Thank you poet friend for appreciating the above write and the supportive illustration. It is rather fun trying to design some shapes with words. Wishing you a cheerful day