Placed First in: 1397 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand
Summer Joy Hiku a sweet cold treat melting softly in the mouth~ summer joy in hand. e r ~ ~ a a s -w -e -e -t c o l d t ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ t m ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ y in the m ~o ~ u ~t ~h~ e ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ l l ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~t t ~ ~ ~ ~ f l ~ ~ ~o n ~ s g s ~u ~m ~m ~e ~r j -o -Y in h ~ a ~n ~d.
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