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stopping in an alley on a summer day

Stopping in an alley on a summer day rainbow trash exhaling its hot fetid breath a scamper of invisible residents searching for the remains of elegant dining the Nordic hum of struggling A/C units as an evening sun seems to avoid entry music drifts from an open window slowly fades in the humidity peeking over my shoulder I slide behind the dumpster…

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Date: 7/20/2025 12:28:00 AM
Grit and grace in equal measure—urban decay meets poetry. That final line lingers like a held breath.
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Date: 7/16/2025 8:56:00 AM
Lovely scene you've set here, John. Did you observe any skunks, raccoons or possums 'doing the nasty?' ~ Peep Ng Tom
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Date: 7/14/2025 5:22:00 AM
Not exactly my idea of a walk in the park. Fosho
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John Lawless
Date: 7/14/2025 6:39:00 AM
Well, Tom, there are not many trees in the city......and a man must go where a man must go...

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