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sprout and granddaughter

a small champaka sprout lost to the receding flood my grand daughter's face.

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Date: 7/31/2025 12:49:00 PM
oh, it feels like a tragedy happened. Sad one.
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 7/31/2025 7:40:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 7/30/2025 9:41:00 PM
A heart felt Haiku, Akham. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us. A poet friend, to be, in Texas, Bill
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Bill Baker
Date: 7/31/2025 8:59:00 AM
What country do you live in, Akham? Just curious. :-)
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 7/31/2025 5:20:00 AM
I live in Manipur(Imphal) India
Date: 7/29/2025 11:53:00 AM
The read cast me sad. Ignorant about the word, I looked Champaka up and it isn't in Websters, but Websters does declare Champak is a tree so when Soup's spell check indicated Champaka should be capitalized I went straight to confused. Follow that? Either which, whatever way, your granddaughter's joy level was deflated, and we can't have that! I think you Haiku words, I think its intent was 'ahhhhh' CayCay
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 7/29/2025 9:09:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 7/29/2025 10:55:00 AM
This seems a bit sad. Love the imagery, my friend!
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 7/29/2025 9:08:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 7/29/2025 10:46:00 AM
- A wistful haiku, Akham - hugs
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 7/29/2025 9:08:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 7/24/2025 3:44:00 AM
a few lines that say so much ! Nice reading you this morning, have a great day !
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 7/24/2025 7:47:00 PM
Thank you.

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