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Some Day

we were on that cliff   prosed in lovers embrace
stars close enough to touch
made love so wonderful   you held me tight
then from my arms you slipped
I cried
please come back I pray

there will be a day     some way
you will see what you have become
that day will make me weep
with pride I hope     don't you see
what you mean to me

it hurts my pride you don't trust
the ones that love you the most    
my heart left in your hands
I want to bring you close to my bosom
I try to hold you most    but you pull away
what can I say

our time was short      so beautiful while it lasted
your hand on my face tracing lines of ties
times of life
yes some day

Brooke Dylan 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/20/2014 4:59:00 PM
I could feel the great sadness in that loss. A great expression of love lost... Bravo!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 5/16/2014 7:57:00 PM
So lovely Brooke, some day, you never know what is around the corner, take care my friend.......................Vera..................
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Date: 5/15/2014 6:37:00 AM
Soup mail my friend
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