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So It Begins

so it begins
i can see the light
not that one you nitwit
but the world looking bright

what is causing this breakview
i hear you say
tbe expertise of a surgeon
has saved tbe day

had a cataract 
which made seeing gross
now life is bright again
no more remorse

the only trouble is 
i can see dust what a shame
lived once in ignorant bliss
now can write my name

so it begins.... seeing my demise
now i look through bright shiny eyes.

penned 8 February 2019

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Wayland Bunch

Date: 10/21/2019 2:34:00 AM

Well I could also see a light. I hope you get some contact from me. I have things to share with you.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 2/26/2019 8:57:00 PM

I need to have cataract surgery like you did, Seeing Dust Totally mind blowing! Fun poem Panagiota USA

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/26/2019 9:04:00 PM

had both eyes done now it was worth tbe expense. good luck. and thank you...Seren

Jan Allison

Date: 2/9/2019 6:05:00 AM

love the humour about the dust Seren - its amazing what surgery can do these days!:-) hugs Jan xx