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Selfish reward

Feeling pulse
Rhythmic pull
Thud and ache
A simple tool
She lays so still
Pale soft and clear
A red painted lip
Finds man's one weakness 
Her body firm explore 
I learn
Softer still I find warmth and joy
As urges pull between soft wet glow
Grabbing hard hips laced in silk
Pulse explodes in desires thrill
Body one a thrilling Humm 
I've become her favorite toy 
Drips hold until water flows 
Drowning sweet
Until thirst unfolds

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Alesia Leach

Date: 5/24/2025 6:05:00 PM

The rhythm in this is strong--short, deliberate lines that echo the pacing of breath and pulse. The transitions from tool to toy, and ache to joy, create a powerful emotional arc beneath the sensual surface. The ending--“until thirst unfolds”--is both satisfying and suggestive. Well-crafted restraint.