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Selfish reward

Feeling pulse Rhythmic pull Thud and ache A simple tool She lays so still Pale soft and clear A red painted lip Finds man's one weakness Her body firm explore I learn Softer still I find warmth and joy As urges pull between soft wet glow Grabbing hard hips laced in silk Pulse explodes in desires thrill Body one a thrilling Humm I've become her favorite toy Drips hold until water flows Drowning sweet Until thirst unfolds

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Alesia Leach

Date: 5/24/2025 6:05:00 PM

The rhythm in this is strong--short, deliberate lines that echo the pacing of breath and pulse. The transitions from tool to toy, and ache to joy, create a powerful emotional arc beneath the sensual surface. The ending--“until thirst unfolds”--is both satisfying and suggestive. Well-crafted restraint.