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Revised Demise

Revised Demise

The doctor had bad news for Ted
In six more months he would be dead
To him it was a bitter pill
He still owed money on the bill
His death was moved a year ahead

Humorous Limerick Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Tania Kitchin
June 29, 2019

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Date: 7/9/2019 1:01:00 PM
LOL, love it
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Date: 7/7/2019 1:36:00 AM
Love the clever humor here. Super cool poem!
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 7/7/2019 9:26:00 AM
Thank you, JWE!
Date: 7/6/2019 9:54:00 AM
Excellent limerick, Ralph. Best compliment I can give you is I wish I had written it. Thank you for stopping by.Best to you. / M
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 7/7/2019 9:26:00 AM
Thank you, Maurice.
Date: 7/2/2019 4:59:00 AM
Black humor but a great one nevertheless dear, Ralph! Much enjoyed! Good luck my friend!
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 7/2/2019 7:57:00 AM
Hi Demetrious: If you remember Henny Youngman, I was inspired by his short humor.
Date: 6/30/2019 5:38:00 PM
Good one, Ralph, thanks for the chuckle. Best of luck in the contest. John
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Date: 6/30/2019 2:22:00 PM
haha, GREAT last line!
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