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Perfect Like a God

Pure as heaven
      Sweet as honey
         Beautiful as the moon
                             Clear as the sky 
                                  Warm as the sun
                                         Wide as the ocean
                                               Clear as an angel face 
                                                              Perfect like a GOD 
                                                                  That is who my lover truly is
                                                                         The man I use to pray to have
                                                                      The man I use to seek in my  dream
                                                    He's my everything and everything yet not much
                                          This is how I see him , how I know him
                              And that's how I'm completely , madly , crazy in love with him
                With everything that includes him
       He's the best of me , he's all of me as I am all of him 
And nothing and no one could ever change that , not even destiny nor death

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/27/2016 6:53:00 PM

When love strikes and bites, well its the best infection one can have!!! :)

Dalia Shahein
Date: 11/28/2016 7:00:00 AM

It's true , I'm glad I've been infected by love , it's the greatest feeling , I love when I feel my heart beating so fast when I hear his voice or how the blood that in my veins starts boiling when I see him there's no such a greater feeling , thank you my dear for your beautiful words , it's appreciated , hugs / / :)

Keith Teaser

Date: 11/27/2016 3:49:00 PM

Great perspective! Curious did you set out the writing like a cupids arrow? A symbol of love..:)

Dalia Shahein
Date: 11/27/2016 4:23:00 PM

Oooh , thank you my dear for the most sweet comment ever I'm really delighted and thrilled by these sweet beautiful words , much appreciated / hugs :)

White Sage

Date: 11/25/2016 4:47:00 AM

This is a perfectly beautiful poem that portrays a great love. it shows the beauty that abodes deep in your heart, this kind of love stays incarnated in the heart, even after ages, and this kind of rare love is meant for unique women like you...Dalia, this is really great!

Dalia Shahein
Date: 11/25/2016 7:43:00 AM

Thank you very much my sweet friend for your beautiful , lovely words I really appreciate it and I hope we age together , he's my other half , he completes me // hugs :)