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Perfect Like a God

Pure as heaven Sweet as honey Beautiful as the moon Clear as the sky Warm as the sun Wide as the ocean Clear as an angel face Perfect like a GOD That is who my lover truly is The man I use to pray to have The man I use to seek in my dream He's my everything and everything yet not much This is how I see him , how I know him And that's how I'm completely , madly , crazy in love with him With everything that includes him He's the best of me , he's all of me as I am all of him And nothing and no one could ever change that , not even destiny nor death

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/27/2016 6:53:00 PM

When love strikes and bites, well its the best infection one can have!!! :)

Dalia Shahein
Date: 11/28/2016 7:00:00 AM

It's true , I'm glad I've been infected by love , it's the greatest feeling , I love when I feel my heart beating so fast when I hear his voice or how the blood that in my veins starts boiling when I see him there's no such a greater feeling , thank you my dear for your beautiful words , it's appreciated , hugs / / :)

Keith Teaser

Date: 11/27/2016 3:49:00 PM

Great perspective! Curious did you set out the writing like a cupids arrow? A symbol of love..:)

Dalia Shahein
Date: 11/27/2016 4:23:00 PM

Oooh , thank you my dear for the most sweet comment ever I'm really delighted and thrilled by these sweet beautiful words , much appreciated / hugs :)

White Sage

Date: 11/25/2016 4:47:00 AM

This is a perfectly beautiful poem that portrays a great love. it shows the beauty that abodes deep in your heart, this kind of love stays incarnated in the heart, even after ages, and this kind of rare love is meant for unique women like you...Dalia, this is really great!

Dalia Shahein
Date: 11/25/2016 7:43:00 AM

Thank you very much my sweet friend for your beautiful , lovely words I really appreciate it and I hope we age together , he's my other half , he completes me // hugs :)