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Parting

Parting

Marlene is dying
right now as these words
tumble onto electronic paper
her body is fighting, fighting

I talk to her
“Its alright”, I say
“you know the way”
we have discussed the other side

I am a selfish *****
thinking of myself, now
while she is dying;
striding across

her long legs anxious
to move on, explore
frustrated, impatient that
her body won’t give up

I am not there
they helicoptered her to TO
my thoughts are there
waiting for her freedom

I talk to her
stroke the book of shells 
that she loaned to me
each page I run my fingers

across the beauty left
after death, “find the light”
I say, “follow it.”
“forgive me my trespasses”.

For my friend who is dying even as I write.

You have embraced life
I have wasted it in hiding
a coward drenched in fear
while you swam with the sharks
laughing and unafraid.
Gentle friend the universe is yours!








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Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/12/2017 4:54:00 PM
I'm rendered speechless. All your love wisdom and tenderness exposed in this honest beautiful pen. Hugs and love dear poetess.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 12/12/2017 6:26:00 PM
Thank you my sister.
Date: 12/12/2017 2:48:00 PM
I haven't read anything so poignant in a very long time. God bless you!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 12/12/2017 4:22:00 PM
thank you Sunny One.
Date: 12/12/2017 10:13:00 AM
This is beautiful, Patricia. Nicely done, indeed.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 12/12/2017 11:45:00 AM
Thank you Dale.
Date: 12/12/2017 8:00:00 AM
A loving tribute, you were not a coward Patricia, you were just you... Well written... Sorry about your friend..
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 12/12/2017 8:50:00 AM
Silent One I felt like the lion in he Wizard of Oz. Marlene was a force of nature. thank you.
Date: 12/12/2017 6:13:00 AM
A loving tribute...you expressed your grief in moving words.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 12/12/2017 8:45:00 AM
Thank you Vijay.
Date: 12/11/2017 4:33:00 PM
A very emotional poem, nicely written, regards, Kevin x
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 12/11/2017 5:27:00 PM
Thank you Kevin.

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