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Our Planet

We are blessed with our planet and its solar system
the sun shines bringing heat to us and plants
that brighten everything with blasts of colour
and aroma fills our world with heavenly scent.

Trees dot themselves on hills and give us woods
in which many creatures take refuge and shelter
Shyly peeping out at us from the cover of leaves
while going about their daily routines in secret.

At night we get the mysterious moon beaming
some nights so bright that all is high lit and yet
others are very dark putting all in deep shadow
making our eyes trick us seeing who knows what.

One could not get bored with the changes
go on a forage and study things carefully
cherish things you find and keep them safe
to ah about and you will be filled with joy

And dont forget to thank both god and nature
for all the blessing that surround all of us

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Date: 4/30/2024 8:50:00 AM
Inspirational and important message.. we should always count our blessings..
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Date: 4/28/2024 9:50:00 PM
A beautiful message for the day, Shadow.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/29/2024 4:14:00 AM
ty Andy nice of you to visit my page glad you enjoyed it hugs Shadow
Date: 4/28/2024 12:20:00 PM
A wonderful poem on being thankful for the natural world and all that it has to offer, with an emphasis on our home planet and its solar system. You also described the moon, trees, plants, wildlife, and the sun as wonders of nature, as well as the natural world's ever-changing beauty. It stresses how important it is to value and appreciate nature's blessings. Great job, Shadow.
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Date: 4/28/2024 12:23:00 PM
Ty Sotto your words bring joy to my heart hugs Shadow

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