Open Spaces
When going out it frightens me
I can feel the tension, as it builds
It's clash of the titans, the anxiety
It feels like it's war of the worlds
Finding it hard to breathe, loss of air
Eye sight blury, everything turns black
Wanting to leave get on out of there
Again I'm having another panic attack
When my mouth is dry, my lips I lick
That feeling again, I'm going to collapse
Ill health a situasion where I feel so sick
Again like this feels like another rellapse
Closterphobia, not just indoors but outside
All these diffrent faces, gets me anyoned
I then want to find a place I can run and hide
Being in open spaces makes me paroniod
Parts of this were taken from an old poem idea I rewrote and scaped so many times
called misshaps felt this better as descibes tha event but how I do get at times even now
but again like others up dating put into better context OPEN SPACES
WRITTEN BY MY SELF DAVIDSCOTT FEB MARCH 2013 ,,,,,,,,,,inspierd by past present situations
and friends family at those times
PLEASE SOMEONE TELL ME IF THIS TO LONG I FEEL IS BUT ALSO WANTED TO GIVE A LITTLE INSIGHT TO
TME AND SPACE ETC WITHOUT REPEATING MY SELF???
NOTE JUST TWEEKED A LITTLE BIT LIKE OTHERS EXPLAINING THE THEN AND NOW
Copyright © David Scott | Year Posted 2014
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