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On Wisdoms Wing

On top of wings in morning air
the pelican carries my gentle song
of oceans salty pulse we share
along the shore my carefree steps belong

to sooth my soul as waves collide
and chase the morning stars of night away
with talk of jumping little fish beside
it’s days like this that made me want to stay

so swift the flight of thought across my brow
I still my pace to gather wisdoms speak
Least not I miss what’s said to me right now
My journey flows like waves to shore does seek

So blue this sky, so wide this sea
Against the far-off grey lines leading edge
Just let a little bit of heaven cling to me
I seek my highest steps upon its steady ledge

3-2021

1st Place 
 All Yours  March 15  Brian Strand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 3/15/2021 12:31:00 PM
Great tone and meter--pleasant images you created, Jeanne.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 3/29/2021 3:49:00 PM
Hi Vijay, Thanks. I was really working on the meter for a nice flow. I'm glad it worked. :D
Date: 3/15/2021 11:21:00 AM
If you feel as good as the poem is, then you are feeling great right now. :) A great read and photo. Cheers - Gary
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 3/29/2021 3:48:00 PM
Yes, I love this little town I live in, here in Mexico. The sea is my constant companion, whether I walk her edge or just feel her breeze.

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