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On Wisdoms Wing

On top of wings in morning air the pelican carries my gentle song of oceans salty pulse we share along the shore my carefree steps belong to sooth my soul as waves collide and chase the morning stars of night away with talk of jumping little fish beside it’s days like this that made me want to stay so swift the flight of thought across my brow I still my pace to gather wisdoms speak Least not I miss what’s said to me right now My journey flows like waves to shore does seek So blue this sky, so wide this sea Against the far-off grey lines leading edge Just let a little bit of heaven cling to me I seek my highest steps upon its steady ledge 3-2021 1st Place All Yours March 15 Brian Strand

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Date: 3/15/2021 12:31:00 PM
Great tone and meter--pleasant images you created, Jeanne.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 3/29/2021 3:49:00 PM
Hi Vijay, Thanks. I was really working on the meter for a nice flow. I'm glad it worked. :D
Date: 3/15/2021 11:21:00 AM
If you feel as good as the poem is, then you are feeling great right now. :) A great read and photo. Cheers - Gary
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 3/29/2021 3:48:00 PM
Yes, I love this little town I live in, here in Mexico. The sea is my constant companion, whether I walk her edge or just feel her breeze.

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