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Ohhh I Gonna Find That Man

Just one more stand
Make it a brand new day
A little bit smitten am I
I want to make him my man
 
The beginning to end
Thoughts making me hazy
Leaves me weakening to the touch
 That is my sweet man

Kneeling to my knees
Turning and turning on that carousel
Ohhh....... I want to love that man
 
He is so fine
Putty in my hands
On a mission with care
Headed everywhere
Ohhh…... I love that man
 
OH…....I can hardly breathe
Separate from the sky
Ohhh..... just one more time
To hold me and take me to his stand
I want that man
 
Just one night like this I never had
With tongues that flame so high
Ohhh...... I want that man
 
Come as you are
The smoke is getting higher and higher
He is the ace you never thought
OHHH...... you want to touch
Would this be enough….
Oh yes…..  I want that man

Brooke Dylan 2014

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Date: 5/13/2014 1:08:00 PM
Hey, when you find him...let me know how it works out...as this might possibly be a figment of your imagination...loved your words...
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/13/2014 3:19:00 PM
ha ha... hello KJ. I sure will.. I have had a hard time finding the one I want..lol never hurts to try though,..
Date: 5/12/2014 11:22:00 AM
enjoyed the dizzy, giddy feel of this piece, brooke.. he's gong to be the one to find you.. delightful!.. huggs
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/12/2014 11:26:00 AM
thank you Nette... you are so kind hugs

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