Now

Now that you are gone
this life is so empty 
remembering what could have been
struggling with goodbye, as life goes on
does it make me strong ...

We were on the cliff
your love was so pure
heartache was falling, with our breath too shallow
Came from ringlets of devotion
Joining the old with the new....Dripping words my love,
Pains of silence, drop around us
Closed out, definitely alone
The past you cannot see
Crying pain....what else is there to be...

Now my love, now that you are gone
Now forever heartaches, torn apart
Forevermore.............

Now....

Brooke Dylan 2014

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John Michaels

Date: 6/20/2014 5:11:00 AM

Another sad poem written straight from the heart. Am going to check out some more of your work...

Jeremy Street

Date: 5/20/2014 1:38:00 PM

Smile, You Crack Me Up, Baby Girl! But We Can Understand Somewhat Where Your Gifted Beauty's Words, Art Coming From Yet, I Am Not Quite Certain If Most Other's Can ? A True Poet; And As One Gazes About This World We Know Now..With Compassion's Loving And Understanding Heart, We, Blow Their Priceless Tears, `Sincerity's....Deepest Kiss....Love, Jeremy *

Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/20/2014 1:40:00 PM

You are amazing Jeremy... simply amazing... hugs and kisses. love Brooke

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2014 7:29:00 PM

It's very sad. I really liked that one line "Pains of silence drop around us"

Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/13/2014 7:44:00 PM

Thank you Andrea.. hugs

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/13/2014 7:23:00 PM

Another brilliant write that could have came only from a life experience. A love embraced so deeply but fallen so completely. Sad.. One has to feel the pain when reading!!

Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/13/2014 7:38:00 PM

Thank you so much robert I love your comment... hugs

Tim Smith

Date: 5/13/2014 7:16:00 PM

This is so sad Brooke. My heart goes out to you,,,hugs Tim

Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/13/2014 7:19:00 PM

Thank you Tim.. so good to see you.. hugs