Nights draw in

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Inspired by Paula Goldsmith

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We harvest all we can
to last us through winter
Glance at the majestic moon
and make a wish with her

Magical things happen
as her rays beam down
a soft side of night
cuddles us close

Dreams come in quietly 
holding us nearer
We stop to reflect
on things gone by

The nights get shorter
the air carries a chill 
which we wrap up against
Now's the time to shut down

I'll stir again when its warmer 
until that time I will slumber
until spring returns
and the nights get longer.

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/14/2025 1:43:00 PM

A very good poem. I relate to following the sun. So true, it's difficult to wake up in winter.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/11/2025 4:46:00 PM

What a captivating poem, Shadow. I love the nostalgic and reflective feel of your words about embracing fall. I especially liked: The nights get shorter the air carries a chill which we wrap up against Now's the time to shut down Glad to have you back...love your poetic voice, hugs, Sara

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/11/2025 5:31:00 PM

ah Sara it gladdens my heart to see you and to read your lovely comments I am never far away I just finished my new book "Enter My world" which should be available end of September hugs Shadow