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Midnight Chime

the vibration
of the violin
fading to the timbre
of voices
upon the stage

midnight hour
slowly chiming in
as the bartender
pours another drink

her lipstick
slowly kisses the edges
as she sips away
her pain

she sees her lover
in the reflection
of mind 
paling
with every sip

she downs another
as his face
becomes a mirage
in the haze

she remembers
his touch
        his scent
                his kiss
                       his words
as he walked away

surely just one more
will make him disappear
from memory

she orders another
as he walks in
the dimly lit room
with a woman
wrapped in the curls
of his arms

his eyes
catch hers
with the look
of regret

she can't see 
past the pain
but doesn't let him see
instead she smiles

as she sets her drink aside
and kisses the bartender
goodnight

she walks away
casting silhouettes 
like shadows
on the sidewalks
as her pain
subsides

with the tempo
of night's zephyr
she exhales a sigh
as the mist of darkness
traces the contours of her face

like a fog lifting
her breath rises
as she smiles
with the same fullness
as this moon
illuminating
the night

       
                feb 21, 2020

clueless as to where this came from....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 5/21/2020 12:26:00 PM
Lovely, sometimes we never know where they come from but I hope you might font your font some other time. Congrats on your win
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Date: 5/18/2020 1:36:00 PM
Wow Sandra...who has not been there...superbly written.
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Date: 5/18/2020 9:09:00 AM
Surely just one more will erase the memory. Nicely written, Sandy, congrats on your win. Hugs, John
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Date: 2/23/2020 2:20:00 PM
Wherever it came from, it's a classic C&W ballad. Just right for my favorite country singer on my favorite country station. Thanks! ~ Gershon
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/23/2020 7:59:00 PM
Thank you so much Gershon... hugs
Date: 2/22/2020 10:25:00 PM
Tales of endless repeats, whereto, an independent party lends more than an ear and permits her a gift of a noticeable and vengeful kiss, another perfect bitty, Sandra, loving them! -- Aloha!~@wk
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/23/2020 7:58:00 PM
Thank you so much William... hugs
Date: 2/21/2020 3:51:00 PM
Well done my friend--this story is true to life. I was thinking she would do something crazy, being under the influence (well she kissed the bartender)--instead she shows courage to just walk away. Excellent poetry, as always, Sandy.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/21/2020 9:29:00 PM
Thank you Vijay... i didn't set out to write this, the first couple lines was in my head as i wanted to write for a contest but my muse does her own thing sometimes... the ending i did give a little thought to though once i sat and read what i wrote... hugs :)
Date: 2/21/2020 12:23:00 PM
Wow, lucky bartender. : ) This was really well written Sandy. I could picture this through the smoky haze of this bar. I could feel her heart breaking but her strength taking command of the situation and placing that smile on her face...but I can also feel her tears once the door closes behind her. Really nicely done.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/21/2020 9:26:00 PM
Thanks Chris...i have no clue where this one came from i was looking at a contest to enter, sat to write and my muse kind of went in a path that left me wondering where she dug that up.. not a drinker, not a bar person but glad you enjoyed it... hugs
Date: 2/21/2020 12:22:00 PM
- I can feel her pain ... and watch her walk home alone - a wonderful poem, Sandra - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/21/2020 9:24:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise...i opened up soup to write for a contest and my muse kind of went her own way... hugs

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