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Message For the Undertaker

Yo bro.  . . got what you said,
look in to put us poets to rest,
I've got news for you home boy,
This turf ain't big enough for the 
two of us! 

Get down and get your feet wet. 
ain't no gods gonna help us and 
that's a fact,
Play  time is over Mr. Gravedigger,
Bring it on and lets show the world 
a good fight!

Cool.  .its show time, 
for the guy with the Mic,
What's the hurry Mr. Rhyme,
scared you might miss  your flight.

Heard you came back snooping 
around,
with all the loud sounds and talk,
Told you once boy to be pretty nice,
Or you'll get a wrestling lesson you 
won't soon forget.

I've got your name on my list and 
draw,
pretty soon this town is gonna be a 
bloody war, 
pack up your bags and leave by the 
back door,
Im not gonna tell you twice just 
spare me the trouble.



this is dedicated to  by jalani jenkins
for his Gravedigger poem
that got me inspired.  . . so thank 
you
my friend

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Just That Archaic Poet

Date: 8/29/2013 9:35:00 AM

Your bring a modern "homeboy", "ghetto" type flair to this piece, and it's quite interesting. I'm unaccustomed to it, which isn't a bad thing. My only issue is with the third stanza; it doesn't seem to belong and feels a bit forced. Personally I would omit it, but in the end, it's really subjective; some readers may love it. This is a cool piece and an interesting poem; well done for bringing a modern edge to it.

Danesh Morgan
Date: 8/29/2013 4:50:00 PM

You are a very good observer! indeed i ponder over that 3rd stanza coz this same in a flow yes i would delete it as it somehow like a stop sign in the middle of a race thank for pointing it out

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/29/2013 9:36:00 AM

should say * you bring