Love Or Hate-Minichu

LOVE or HATE MINICHU

Choose to love choose to hate
foolish world displays hate not love
love must wait

Choose love not hate
which one choose is question, my friend
debate

ones great
what happens to
fate

Choose to love choose to hate
which one choose is question, my friend
fate

Feb. 22, 2021
Love or Hate Minichu contest
Sponsored by Mohan Chutani

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/18/2021 8:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. The question is to "LOVE or HATE." Love is the one to pick. A good write. Have a blessed day................

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/5/2021 8:49:00 AM

Hi Barbara , Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/5/2021 6:50:00 AM

Congratulations on the win Barbara! Linda

Mohan Chutani

Date: 3/5/2021 4:11:00 AM

Barbara, thanx for participating in my contest. your Minichu would have placed much higher if your rhyming alignment of middle lines of each stanza was as requested. I am happy your entry was not deleted by anyone as you thought it to be so. Anyway, Congrats for your placement. Hope you will continue to participate in my contests in future too with improvement on the small error that occurred as it was your first attempt. Best. Mohan.

Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 9/6/2023 7:13:00 PM

Do I have egg on my face!!! I hit a rough spot with health, didn't even recall if I checked to see if placed, I found this, because you just encouraged me to submit to current contest. I am so appreciative of support. You are extra, extra kind. You would make a gret poetry teacher. Forgive. my error. Thank you so much for everything, and placement!!!!